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Monday, August 3, 2026

The Author Ladder: Triumphs, Rejections, and the Real Climb to Publication

On my journey up the Author Ladder, I'm often asked about triumphs and mistakes, swings and misses.

The Author Ladder? 

Image by Pheladii at Pixabay
Image by Pheladii of Pixabay

Yup. From the idea that pushes against the sides of your skull until you finally let it escape to the page, to the lofty heights of best-seller lists and movie deals, every accomplishment, no matter how small, is another rung upward. 

The trouble with that ladder is the very top can feel impossibly far away, shrouded in mist. Sometimes the rungs are so close together you hardly feel your progress. Other times the upward stretch feels too far, too hard to reach.

And then there are those slippery rungs that crash you back to earth.

So, when I'm asked about triumphs, I hesitate. Inside, I feel like I'm on a kitchen step stool and having a hard time managing even that. 

Then I take stock of my journey. I realize I am farther along than I thought and having a lot of fun along the way. I feel the progress in the questions people ask me, the outreach I get, the way others see what I sometimes can't see in myself.

I've been the invited moderator of literary festivals and conferences. I've interviewed NYT best-selling authors for fundraisers and major events. My books have received glowing reviews--maybe not from People Magazine or Publishers Weekly, but from respected publications that target a large segment of my readers. My stories appear in Anthony Award-winning anthologies, and my novels have won industry respect.

A recent guest appearance on a popular author blog has been getting a lot of attention, too. And I'm always thrilled when an emerging writer, someone with an idea buzzing in their head, asks me to take a look at their first chapters. 

I have a new novel on submission with publishers now. The rejections make gripping those rungs just a little harder, but they also let me know I'm on the right track. 


Saturday, June 6, 2026

SERIOUSLY? LONG TIME, NO SEE

I was kinda shocked to see I haven't posted in over a year. 


Hiking in NH with a buddy

What's wrong with me? Am I okay? What's taken me so long?

Yes, I'm okay, and I'm just a human. And as far as what's taken me away from blogging?

I have no single answer for that.

I've not marked the moments of my Writing Life more frequently because, well, Life Life was a bit much at times.

To summarize in no particular order since my last post:

WRITING LIFE:

  • I moderated two crime and mystery panels at the Newburyport Literary Festival,
  • Two short stories were published,
  • I have a novel on submissions with my agent,
  • I interviewed a famous author for a fundraising event,
  • I continue to be on the New England Crime Bake conference committee,
  • I enjoyed getting tipsy with my writer peeps at said conference,
  • Oh, and moderated a panel at the same,
  • I have a major case of agent angst,
  • I interviewed a lovely cozy author for her umpteenth book launch,
  • I enjoyed participating in various author/book events,
  • I've received many wonderful, detailed, heartfelt rejections from very big publishers,
  • I contributed to a play about caregivers,
  • Oh, and my author Facebook page mysteriously and completely disappeared,
  • And I have no idea how or why I pissed off Zuckerberg,

LIFE LIFE:
  • My mom passed away,
  • My oldest son moved to Brazil,
  • Said son married a lovely woman
  • I realized learning Portuguese may be in my future,
  • Daughter got engaged to a man we adore,
  • When middle son says, "You won't have to care for the cat. It belongs to all the roommates," he doesn't mean it,
  • I love hiking in VT and NH mountains and the seashores in MA,
  • My garage is way, way too full of stuff I can't politely name,
  • My husband grew to really love that ornery cat,
  • I learned estate battles are ugly and have weirdly unhealthy histories,
  • I have incredibly wonderful friends,
  • And an amazing husband,
  • I am slowly rekindling my socials. 
I may add or delete some posts, but it's just life in all of its glory. 

Overall, I'm good.

And I hope you are, too.

Monday, October 29, 2018

The Ups and Downs of Writing

You haven't heard from me in a while. Oh, I've posted a few things here, but I haven't written to you directly. I've been ghosting my own blog.

It's not like I haven't been working every single day on my writing. Fall arrives with its events, both family and professional. I'll confess to having brain space issues as some family matters have demanded the lion's share of my processing capacity. Some days, I feel as if I've been shot out of a canon.

Between trips to New York and throughout New England, I've been diligently working on my fourth novel. An author's deep secret is that we often prefer the solace of our work to real life. We can kill a character or two, or cry at our keyboards as we concoct gut-wrenching situations. The hours spent shaping and refining scenes are some of the most rewarding.

But they are lonely hours, and days can blur together. Finding a way to mark progress and feel accomplished is sometimes hard to do, but I discovered a method.

While writing the first draft, I marked progress by noting my word count. Each time I sat down, I noted the prior day's date and the total word count in my WIP in a separate document. Since I'm a pantser, to get back into the flow, I would revise the prior day's work. Sometimes the word count plummeted as I hacked out sections. (I do have a "Dumped Passages" document, so work is not lost forever.) Once buffed, I advance the story. 

During the first draft phase, I keep my butt parked until I reached the day's goal, typically a net gain of 500 words. A good day was over 1000. Yes, I've had 5000 word days, but not as a norm. The word count inched upwards. I marked each 10K with a colored highlight and a glass of wine.

According to seasoned agents, the sweet spot for the total word target for my genre, suspense/thriller, is between 90K. It can be up to 100K if the author knocks it out of the park. Find Cally's first draft was completed at 91,286 words. 

The first draft is the raw clump of clay on the wheel. Revisions shape and add clarity. I needed to add clarity without adding words. My word count inched up.

This is where the fun part began and I sharpened my skill as a story-teller. By keeping focused on the number of words, I made hard decisions about what advanced the story forward or what passages acted like a sea anchor and slowed my story down. I consolidated dialog and streamlined action. 

My editor weighed in. I added two chapters. My count today is 91,281.

I have agents who have requested a full manuscript of Find Cally. I'm confident I'm presenting the best darned product I can within the target word count that will make their hearts pitter patter. 

And the long wait of the submission process begins, and I'll be counting days and not words. 

I'll be far from idle. You'll find me speaking at libraries and bookstores in New England. I'm muddling through ideas for my fifth novel and I'm thrilled to have sold a short story to Mystery Weekly magazine. 

Oh. It's almost Halloween. No more ghosting. Promise.

6/11/2018               74,219
6/12/2018               75,159
6/13/2018               75,848
6/14/2018               77,150
6/15/2018               78,177
6/17/2018               78,379
6/18/2018               79,489
6/19/2018               80,739
6/21/2018               80,801
6/22/2018               82,043
6/23/2018               83,346
6/24/2018               84,706
6/25/2018               86,222
6/26/2018               89,493
6/27/2018               91,296 First draft Done!!!whoo hoo! Yippee!
7/25/2018               91,836
7/27/2018               91,311
7/30/2018               91,642 first revision minus Dak scene!
8/2/2018                 92,974 – insert of redone Dak interview scene
8/3/2018                 92,486
8/4/2018                 91,984
8/5/2018                 91,711
8/6/2018                 91,404 second revision! Yahoo! It’s BETA time!
8/30/2018               91,410
9/3/2018                 91,390
9/4/2018                 91,884 After V-Day rework
9/5/2018                 91,720 after Mother Love to C4
9/25/2018               91,708
9/26/2018               91,558 after day 1 revision
9/27/2018               91,524
10/1/2018               91,461
10/7/2018               91,257
10/11/2018             91,233
10/14/2018             91,232
10/18/2108             91,273
10/20/2018             91,297

10.29/2018             91,281

Thursday, March 15, 2018

GUEST POST: Book Titles to Remember, and Some to Forget


You've met Ursula Wong on my blog before as she weighed in on why people like reading about strong women and why women fight.  Read on, and a special treat is that she has a new book out in her Amber War Series that blends the unique strength of a woman into a soldier who fights for the love of her country. I know you'll find her take on book titles interesting!


Book Titles to Remember, and Some to Forget
By Ursula Wong

Ideally, book titles should be compelling, unique, and trigger an emotion. Above all else, a title should leave an impression about the book. It took a long time to name my Amber War Series about the Soviet occupation of Eastern Europe. I still wonder if I got it right, because once, when I was at an event promoting the first book in the series, Amber Wolf, a few people called me Ms. Wolf instead of Ms. Wong, confusing the book title with my name. Did I get it wrong?  Let’s take a look a few well-known titles and see how they measure up.

Some titles tell us exactly what the book is about. We know right away that the main character in Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll will visit a strange and magical place, the agent in The Spy Who Came in From the Cold by John le Carre, will have a hard time leaving a communist bloc country, and the events in A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens will be as outstanding as the cities themselves. To me, these are fabulous titles.

The late Sue Grafton named her Kinsey Millhone series after letters in the alphabet, but I give her credit in coming up with creative solutions with a mystery theme especially in U is for Undertow, Y is for Yesterday, and X all by itself.

Some titles convey a theme, but this can leave readers wondering what the book is about. Twilight by Stephenie Meyer could be about aliens living in the dark, but we know it speaks to the vampire world between life and death. The Nightingale by Kristin Hannah brings thoughts of spring and nature, but this is a WWII story about two women in German occupied France. If the themes are compelling and interesting, the names work. Otherwise, they can be near misses.

Some titles trigger a feeling. In Cold Blood by Truman Capote sends chills up my spine while giving a hint that the subject is about murder, making this title a winner on several levels. The title Cold Mountain by Charles Frazier gives no information that the story takes place during the Civil War, but it works because it conveys the feeling of isolation and the possibility of overcoming obstacles, two important themes in the novel.

Other titles just don’t work well. With all due respect to the authors, The Storyteller’s Tale by Omair Ahman, and The Accordionist’s Son by Bernardo Atxaga tell us nothing about the stories and convey little impression. This is unfortunate because both novels speak to very interesting times in history.

We shouldn’t judge people by their clothes or books by their titles, but we do. My hope is that readers forgive us when we choose poorly (and read our books anyway), and that we writers think hard about our choices, doing our level best to get it right.


Back Cover:





World War II is over, but the fighting in Eastern Europe continues as Lithuanian resistance fighters wreak havoc on the Soviet occupiers. Their guerilla tactics incite Russian leaders to amass their power against the tiny resistance. But sheer force is not enough as the freedom fighters join Polish partisans, and a Soviet spy infiltrates the camp of the Amber Wolf.






Bio:
Ursula Wong writes about strong women struggling against impossible odds to achieve their dreams. Her new novel, Amber War, continues the spell-binding story of Lithuanian farmers fighting the Soviet occupation of WWII. For more about Ursula, visit http://ursulawong.wordpress.com.










Friday, April 14, 2017

ARLENE KAY: STRONG WOMEN CAN LAUGH AT THEMSELVES

My first impression of Arlene Kay was at a Sisters in Crime conference. I was aware of a group of people huddled together. They would erupt with laughter, then fall silent, in obvious rapture listening to a powerhouse of a woman at their center. Enter Arlene Kay into my life. 

I've since been fortunate enough to share events with Arlene. Whether it's at Boston Book Festival, New England Library Association or other author events, time spent with Arlene is always fun. 


She's smart and sexy and writes smart and sexy books. 


What do I enjoy most about her? 


She doesn't take herself too seriously.




Strong Women Can Laugh at Themselves
 By Arlene Kay


One of my hallmarks for a strong, self-confident woman is one who appreciates the absurdities of life and some of the truly STUPID things she 
herself has done. 

That made me recall one of my less stellar performances some years ago in Dallas. I had an unfortunate run of luck with my Corvette (Lord, I loved that car), and decided that a brand new sports car was a smart move. Forget what Pope Francis says about FIATS, I purchased a Fiat X-19, a beautiful little red number dubbed “baby Porsche” and proudly sailed around Texas in it—-until it hit 12,000 miles which coincidentally meant the end of warranty. That piece of excrement was towed more than driven until one day while motoring to work, I looked in the mirror and saw that rear engine on fire! Actual flames spurting from the back!  

Naturally I panicked fearing an imminent explosion. I was relieved to see a gas station ahead and turned in. 

The attendant waved his arms in what I assumed was a welcome gesture but I was so wrong. Actually he was
screaming, “Lady, DON’T come in or this place will explode.”

He ran toward me, florid of face, with fire extinguisher in hand, and sprayed that foam all over my smoldering heap of Italian engineering.

Later, everyone who heard this tale said virtually the same thing: “That’s the dumbest move you’ve ever made!”

Come to think of it, they were right and the final irony—my Fiat X-19 survived to break down yet again.







BIO: 

Former Treasury executive Arlene Kay is known for snarky, sensual suspense and intriguing mysteries that bedevil and delight readers. Published novels include: INTRUSION; DIE LAUGHING; THE ABACUS PRIZE;(Mainly Murder Press), the Boston Uncommons Series: SWANN DIVE; MANTRAP; GILT TRIP; SWANN SONGS; (Belle Bridge Books), and coming in 2017, the Leather and Lace Series featuring QUAGMIRE.  She holds graduate degrees in Political Science & Constitutional Law. Despite attaining many of her goals, she still finds joy in every day blunders, particularly her own. 


BACK COVER SUMMARIES AND LINKS:


Cecilia Swann had it all—brains, looks and a staggering fortune. When she plunges off a Boston high rise, the cops called it suicide but best pal Eja Kane knew better: CeCe had a morbid fear of anything higher than a step-ladder. With childhood nemesis Deming Swann, Eja forges an uneasy alliance to avenge her friend and unmask a ruthless murderer.

Dario Peters had a doting grandma and a ton of enemies. His sudden death on a Cape Cod cycling trail was a convenient accident that satisfied the locals but inflamed his influential family. When all else fails, trust the Swann sleuths to tackle this tangled web of larceny, murder and adultery amid the bucolic beauty of Cape Cod where all is definitely not what it seems. 
  

Bride-to-be Eja Kane gets more than she bargained for when she and Annika Swann join a local Dojo. The corpse of a scheming hussy falls at their feet unleashing a financial scandal that engulfs a sexy Sifu, jealous wife, and one of Deming’s biggest clients. Boston society is rocked to its core, forcing the Swann sleuths to learn the true value of precious metal.

For new bride Eja Kane-Swann, revenge is both sweet and deadly when Gabriel Mann the ex-spouse who kicked her to the curb begs for her help. Expect murder, misdirection and a pinch of glamour as that dazzling duo, Eja and Deming explore complex motives, political correctness and academic angst in the rarified air of Cambridge, Massachusetts.





Friday, July 8, 2016

Writers Groups: Worth the Trouble?

Joining a writer's group or not is your business. I really don't care if you do or don't. What I do care about is if you're happy with your choice. My first reaction to being involved with a group is don't.

And then I realized I belong to three.

A little bit of history here. Early in my writing life, I attended workshops and conferences. Consistent advice was to join a group. Read. Comment. Listen. Revise. I did and ran myself ragged following the advice of a lot of people. Some I respected. Most I didn't. My writing suffered, time management went out the window, and productivity wallowed.

For me, what I needed to develop as a writer was time alone on my mountaintop. In the years that passed, I enjoyed a robust career. My confidence bloomed and my skin toughened.


Newburyport Writers

The first writers group I joined focused on networking with others engaged in all aspects of the written craft and the writing business. Corporate bloggers, editors, ghost writers, publishers, journalists, mystery authors, traditional and independently published, wanna-bees, marketeers, and more. You name it, this group has it, and our meetings knit our commonalities and scratched our common itch--whatever that may be. Our monthly potluck dinners are informative, connective, and time well spent.

The years passed and relationships formed. My periscope was not up, so I was surprisingly pleased when I was approached by two writers' groups and invited to join. One is a critique group focused on the craft, the other is a business group focused on branding and business best practices. The members of both are women for whom I have a great deal of respect. They are accomplished in their own right with deep skills and experience. And they are willing to share and wanting to cultivate. Wow.

As fate would have it, their timing was perfect. I had hit a rough patch and stalled. The two new groups are forcing me to be accountable and to stretch for more.

These groups work for me. They fit. I wish you the same.

What about you? Are you in a group or do you prefer to go it alone?

Thursday, June 23, 2016

Revenge and Editing Best When Served Cold




What is it about time that empowers us to slash and burn?

I took an unexpected break from writing my third book. I was in the weeds. The story was muddy, characters were misbehaving, and I spent many more hours staring at the screen than writing. Backstory encroached like a dreaded Kudzu vine and forward momentum ground to a halt.

Then life intervened. You know the drill. Graduations. Aging parents. A death. Spending time at my keyboard became reactive, not proactive and creative. Rather than beating myself up about my writing failures, I gave myself permission to unplug.

Then something wonderful happened.

In a span of time marked "unproductive," a heartless distance bloomed.

I reread my opening pages and I knew my launchpad was sound. A few more pages in and I began to delete. My "Dumped Passages" word count burgeoned while my "Working MS" word count whithered. 

Editing, like revenge, is easiest when done at an emotional distance. A search of the phrase, "revenge is best when served cold" found several orgins, one of which credited a Pashtun proverb of getting back at someone who has wronged you when you have a clear mind and not hot with anger. My favorite was in Urban Dictionary:


  • Old saying from the Mafiosi in Sicily. Tells that the best payback is the one that comes with planning, and that brings the most horrendous pain to your enemies when they are not expecting and are just enjoying the fruits of all the dishonor they brought upon you. One must wait so he can really inflict pain to those who wronged him. Careful planing is necessary so your enemies will suffer terribly, but you won't be harmed by the Law or by your enemies' allies.
This one resonated. The time away from active writing allowed me to mull over my narrative. What was the core story? The enemy was revealed in subplots and backstory. Stepping away allowed me to see them for what they were--instruments of dishonor. I was able to plan their demise with calculated precision. I became an assassin and killed off my little darlings.

I've hacked off limbs and buried the evidence. Now it's time to dust of my trousers and get back to work.




Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Slacker: A Confession

I've been slacking off.

One glance at my blog and you'll notice I've not been posting as much as usual. I've allowed the heavy lifting to be carried by my guests. Amazing women, each of them, with incredible stories of love, life, strength, and loss. One is a world class musician. Another on the cusp of publishing her twelfth novel with a large traditional publisher. Or is it her thirteenth? Yet another is a survivor of the kind of crimes I write about and am thankful I've never experienced. Cancer survivors. A mother who lost children. Accomplished and talented authors round out the mix. In truth, I've been a bit intimidated by them.

I don't know about you, but when I'm intimidated, I pull inside of myself. Think turtle in a shell. Soft on the inside. Hard on the outside.

So, my personal posts have been less frequent. Blog slacking at its ugliest.

The truth is, I'm wondering what it is I have to add. I don't want to add to the noise of the internet. I don't want to be the static one tunes out in order to hear the crux of the broadcast.

The time spent huddled in my shell has been restorative. I've made good progress on my third book, written a couple of short stories, made a few friends, sold a few books. All the while, I've wondered what the Next Great Idea would be. I've lazed under the weight of The Task. How would my thoughts compare to what my guests have written?

What should my next post be about?

I don't know for sure. Maybe I'll post a tidbit on marketing or a snippet of personal life that I pasted into a story. What I do know is that I write for me, because I have to. Writing is as essential as breathing.

This blog is my exhale, readying me for the next breath.





Sunday, September 13, 2015

Guest Gigs and Blog Discovery

Hey all!

I confess to neglecting keeping my blog current. I write at least one blog post a week, but often those posts are as a guest on one the many terrific blogs out there.

I thought I'd keep you posted (pun intended) on a few I've done recently. These are some fantastic blogs and I urge you to check out the authors. They are a handy resource for readers as well as writers.

In no particular order, they are:
  • Writers Who Kill: I love their masthead pictured above. I was the guest of E. B. Davis, a prolific and talented mystery writer with an easy and engaging style. My post answers the question how fiction writers and lawyers are alike. It turns out they share a lot of skills. Post is here.
  • Boston folks know Hank Phillippi Ryan as a top-notch investigative reporter they see on TV. Readers know her as the author of the best selling Jane Ryland series. When she asked me to be a guest on her Femmes Fatale blog, I jumped at the chance! Hanging with other "ferociously talented women dedicated to the fine art of crime fiction" is exactly what I love doing! My post on GRIT is here
  • Dale T. Phillips has a very active life as a writer of hard boiled crime, short stories and more. His blog and website are well worth cruising to see what a New England based author does to promote his work and support others. When he asked me to do a blog interview, I jumped at the chance. Click here to read the Blog Interview.
  • Penny de Byl is an author from Down Under. Meeting in the small village created by social media, Penny reached out to me all the way from Australia to be featured as the first author in her Five Minute Profile series. Cruise her blog and see what's hot in Australia, too. Link to my interview is here.
  • Christine Meunier is another author from Down Under. She has thriving equine education blogs and hosted me on her blogs
  • Rhonda Lane is a fellow Sister in Crime, horse lover, and blogger. She has a great blog that covers all things horse and a terrific sense of humor. My guest gig on her site is here
  • I don't always blog on writing or my background. Stef Reinhold, an expert on horse wellness, asked me to post in her award-winning blog. My topic? Mindfulness in riding. Ahhh... Link here.
Of course, I was beyond excited to be featured as Hallie Ephron's guest on the wildly popular blog Jungle Reds.

On October 15, 2015, I'll be on Renee Scattergood's blog with an interview with Jessica Wyeth, my books' protagonist. You won't believe the things Jessica says!